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Both option 1 and 2 read the same. I think that the intent was that one of the options was that Fred and the King explain what happened, and Melissa does *not* believe them. I extended the story using a third option. I am not sure how well it held together, but I wanted to move the story along. If there are any editing suggestions, I am open to them.

No problem. I've only just seen your message. The forum had logged me out without my noticing, so the icon for this thread wasn't showing up in red to alert me to a new message. As you'll probably have seen, I noticed my mistake with the options and corrected it, but not until after you'd already posted your episode. I hope to get my next episode written in the next day or two.